The Better Man Project

Day (497) – Goodbye

Goodbye old foes

ancient limits

old crust

Goodbye rusty thoughts

painful memories

inaction

Goodbye old path

beaten to dust

well traveled by

Goodbye old life

its been real

and we are at peace

Welcome

the

new

15 Comments

  1. August 23, 2013

    I also thought you were saying goodbye to readers! Glad to see that wasn’t the case :)

    • August 24, 2013

      Haha no no we are all good there. Thanks for the concern though!

  2. August 23, 2013

    Love the goodbye to rusty thoughts!
    Please check out this poem I wrote:
    http://thevibrantchanneledcreator.wordpress.com/2013/08/03/tongue-twister-47-shredders/
    Jeanne Poland

  3. August 23, 2013

    Perfect musical accompaniment! It adds a mystical tone to your conjuring of a new life.

  4. August 23, 2013

    Nice, says a lot in a little. Your last few posts (since I started following you have been very well done. Keep them coming.

  5. August 23, 2013

    The title scared me. I thought you were saying goodbye to your readers!! LOve the imagery in this poem and the term “rusty thoughts”.

  6. August 23, 2013

    Reblogged this on deaniedaisy24's Blog.

  7. August 23, 2013

    Reblogged this on grace1012 and commented:
    WELCOME TO MY WORLD…HAVE A NICE DAY

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