Goodbye

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Goodbye old foes

ancient limits

old crust

Goodbye rusty thoughts

painful memories

inaction

Goodbye old path

beaten to dust

well traveled by

Goodbye old life

its been real

and we are at peace

Welcome

the

new

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    traceygrabowski5
    August 23, 2013 at 12:51 am

    Reblogged this on grace1012 and commented:
    WELCOME TO MY WORLD…HAVE A NICE DAY

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    deaniedaisy24
    August 23, 2013 at 3:50 am

    Reblogged this on deaniedaisy24's Blog.

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    Dadicus Grinch
    August 23, 2013 at 4:50 am

    The title scared me. I thought you were saying goodbye to your readers!! LOve the imagery in this poem and the term “rusty thoughts”.

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    richard0593
    August 23, 2013 at 6:07 am

    Nice, says a lot in a little. Your last few posts (since I started following you have been very well done. Keep them coming.

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    bunkyhuron
    August 23, 2013 at 7:02 am

    Perfect musical accompaniment! It adds a mystical tone to your conjuring of a new life.

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    jmpoland21van
    August 23, 2013 at 8:07 am

    Love the goodbye to rusty thoughts!
    Please check out this poem I wrote:
    http://thevibrantchanneledcreator.wordpress.com/2013/08/03/tongue-twister-47-shredders/
    Jeanne Poland

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    Chocolate Covered Race Medals
    August 23, 2013 at 8:32 am

    I also thought you were saying goodbye to readers! Glad to see that wasn’t the case πŸ™‚

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